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Thank your to the point critique ＾＾ .I think that those shortage and mistake that you say's affirming is all existent, I also have a felling by myself, however, have to admit, because of being subjected to natural endowments and just can limit, this novel I may can write to this kind of level.Only hope that the end part isn't even worse==.Smile.
As for thousand leaves and many farmlands handsome this line, affirmation will be stead fast, I will may well can make the explanation that can round out one's explanation.(make reader satisfied certainly, is not too may …smile)
Is another:I am a girl.You quote from of that sentence is a point of departure the ＾＾ that makes the male reader of one son say.
Read:Net friend:Lyople commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:2 announce time:2006-04-0716:35:23 review a chapter:278
Pure Chuan rather son ……scheming's returning is really deep, she exactly below the hills the feather see what?
Read:They will back a field, because they never and firmly stand to thousand leaf the in front tell her:"I love you!"So ever most being close with thousand leaves is happy of only haded top at first.The sword word scholar noodles& amp;lt;3-2513:29& amps;gt;
Read:This reason is too funny.Have again how many men once once said to own first love did I love you??Once said of come out linhanru& amp for my station;lt;3-2707:29& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]boon, this is a problem.What will that man all generally say to own first love?==Pass by I just to the survey that gives up friend, they can stand out.^0^==:"No matter how mental state think, this is affirmation want to say of", Hey Hey, these are the original words of brothers that I sleep to spread on I.One son& amp;lt;3-2723:25& amps;gt;
Write:Is still saying in the gist so much clear?Is sorry, my seeming to be still has never seen understand you the meaning of that sentence==.Being ashamed is medium...The forest recreation class& amp;lt;3-2723:42& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]sweat, ashamed.My meaning BE, male compatriots of our dormitory all once said three words in"I love you"s to their gfs and ignored how the true viewpoint of their in the mind is.One son& amp;lt;3-2814:18& amps;gt;
Write:So, I didn't comprehend wrong...But, I have a little interrogative, after all, first love and the first girl friend or boyfriend aren't the same concept.First love, we probably even the words didn't say with the other party a , even intentionally chase the other party regard as stranger person, love reason disregard, therefore, probably speak "I love you" words like this?Anyway I have no...The forest recreation class& amp;lt;3-3022:18& amps;gt;
Read:Feelings concerning first love that I suddenly understand forest to consumedly say, is that kind of don't reveal of taking and ordering feelings of good will property for liking?Yes, that does feelings how can go and say "I love you" with the other party?But down stairs how many say of then positive son eight through of be in love, musting say was in love with of, ha ha, to not?The idea& amp of Vinaceous Rosefinch;lt;3-3111:11& amps;gt;
Write:Yes, this is me ＾ is to the comprehension ＾ of the first love:The person fancies opposite sex for the first time of that kind of felt, may develop to arrive to be in love for the first time, also probably can't, see build to turn.Thousand leaves have no this to build to turn==.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;4-914:39& amps;gt;
Read:[Essence]24 years old...This...Be worried about the marriage and then want to mean to cut up rough for a while at the sight of the miss of this age now-some year of about 30 have no male friend message-however, probably I think this age it's too young, while her person think to have already enough and greatly worried these matters, ha ha.The Ning orchid& amp;lt;3-2723:51& amps;gt;
Write:The sweat isn't a miss is worrying, is the mother of miss==.Smile.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;3-3022:14& amps;gt;
Read:Don't like rather son, ah, this book appears of in the just a little important actress color, about only snow is to still go.But rather son, basic list as don't like most of a.The Ning orchid& amp;lt;3-3118:37& amps;gt;
Write:You not the ability dislike them because they hurt thousand leaves' benefitses, the persons are all selfish.Therefore, their conduct and actions, should say no serious mistakes committed==.Smile.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;4-914:42& amps;gt;
Read:The foreshadowing that looking at forest, think whether want to make thousand leaves having the end with go together with together~~say the true, really like not to get up to many farmlands, appreciate his just can, but the person of this kind of type will never be the candidate of the BF in my heart, didn't even say to is moreover half of candidates in the future.Fairy way Lan& amp;lt;3-3122:37& amps;gt;
Write:I can the have nothing at all say==.Smile.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;4-914:43& amps;gt;
Read:555~ personal felling or appear a male to the first the leading role image is the deepest, but think that many farmland letters should can't appear again ……final outcome if with many farmlands believe together should much good~~but read, always feel thousand leaves of final outcome are together the and have an end of ……Liu Ya Er& amp;lt;4-500:18& amps;gt;
Write:Many farmland letters turn head to see a little bit one-time chapters, I also feel to is unwilling him.However, reality is ruthlessnessly …smile.The forest recreation class& amp;lt;4-914:46& amps;gt;
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《On the dark river 》 reads and writes 100 of the contactseses:(Read a reader;Write an author ＾＾ )
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Happiness still needs to fight for by himself/herself of, always go back and forth over there, it will at pay no attention wipe a shoulder but lead.The tree has to be a little bit more brave.The result may combine can't if prepare to think so.
Read:Net friend:Lan commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:2 announce time:2006-04-1111:17:21 review a chapter:111
I really there was also no Nu towards fixing helpless, , start giving up, I felt he hereafter absolutely regret of, I feel that he lies in with many difference with handsome farmlands now, many farmlands are handsome to brave to admit his/her own feelings, so I like many farmlands handsome, ignore whether will succeed, led at least and hard, can't stay a regret.
Read:Small is commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:2 announce time:2006-04-1411:59:15 review a chapter:279
Thousand leaves and mothers' question is accidentally the question of owner, all strange thousand leaveses have'empress mama'....
Read:Net friend:Diver commentary:《On the dark river 》 beats a cent:2 announce time:2006-04-1706:07:24 review a chapter:281
Is alas!Hope rather the son isn't another the woman who stops at nothing for the sake of so-called"love", this kind of woman was really too many, probably this be the tree is in need of of, but still don't like.On the intuition, have the end the another half that can't be thousand leaves(under the author's breakage:), The pure Chuan Che has so little bit may, but I not like, he was really too stuffy, the normal person musted also make an internal injury for him, many farmlands are handsome the most probably, however he was really too bad before and suggested don't .
See now, suddenly Huang Wu the man here in fact is all weak in character and selfish, have no a really love thousand leaves to love to want to disregard to protect her, always"natural and unrestrained" before they may be subjected to injury,beats by dre pro, "puzzling", again or"distress" ground of escape.Before head quarter is thousand leaf's feelings wasn't smooth and deeply concerned at heart, release now however, thousand leaves would wait until to ownly decree by destiny a person, even if have no, also need not for miss those the flower flower and grass grass but regret, because they are unworthy!!
PS:the forest when can finish writing,
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